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Re: Please proofread README.Debian for fwanalog



On Tue, 15 Mar 2005, Emanuele Rocca wrote:
> >  > WARNING: fwanalog output may be analized by a potential attacker
> >  > to guess your firewall ruleset. It may be a good idea to restrict world
> >  > access to these informations.
> >
> >  s/analized/analysed/ and s/informations/information/.
>
> Isn't the plural needed for 'informations'?
> They're more than one, as 'these' points out.

You are using information to mean "collection of facts",
therefore it should read "access to this information".

--Andre



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