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Re: Review of install-menu manpage.

On Mon, Nov 28, 2005 at 11:25:49PM +0000, Dominic Hargreaves wrote:
> On Mon, Nov 28, 2005 at 10:34:19PM +0100, Bill Allombert wrote:
> > Dear Debian L10N English team,
> > 
> > I have rewritten the install-menu manpage, could review it ?
> > .B update-menus(1)
> > compute the list of menu entries and pass it to all the menu-methods in
> "computes".

Needs to be "computes" and also "passes". Menu-methods should not be
hyphenated either.

> > \fI/etc/menu-methods/\fP through standard input. The task of the
> > menu-methods is to generate menu files for the respective window-managers.
> "task of menu-methods".

Menu methods are a group of things, so it should be the "task of the
menu methods" ...

Hamish Moffatt VK3SB <hamish@debian.org> <hamish@cloud.net.au>

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