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Re: Review of install-menu manpage.



On Mon, Nov 28, 2005 at 10:34:19PM +0100, Bill Allombert wrote:
> Dear Debian L10N English team,
> 
> I have rewritten the install-menu manpage, could review it ?

> .B update-menus(1)
> compute the list of menu entries and pass it to all the menu-methods in

"computes".

> \fI/etc/menu-methods/\fP through standard input. The task of the
> menu-methods is to generate menu files for the respective window-managers.

"task of menu-methods".

> .B install-menu
> is written to facilitate this task. For more information, see the menu

s/is written to facilitate/facilitates/

> documentation (see below).
> .SH SYNOPSIS
> .B install-menu [-vh] [--remove] <menu-method>
> .PP
> Read menuentries from stdin in \fIupdate-menus --stdout\fP format and generate

"menu entries"

Otherwise fine.

Cheers,

Dominic.

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