re: Proofreading request: dibbler package descriptions, attempt #2

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On Thu, 3 Nov 2005, Adam D. Barratt wrote:

> Hi,
>
> The following are mostly suggestions, hopefully fairly reasonable ones.
Thanks. I appreciate it. Can I ask for second review? Here's improved
version. I have added homepage links (as suggested by Developer's 
Reference, 6.2.4) to all package descriptions.

--- control ---
Package: dibbler-server
Description: portable DHCPv6 server
 This is a DHCPv6 server. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
 granting) as well as stateless (i.e. options granting) autoconfiguration
 modes of DHCPv6 protocol. Relays are also supported. This package allows
 IPv6 hosts to be automatically configured in your network.
 .
 Dibbler homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

Package: dibbler-client
Description: portable DHCPv6 client
 This is a DHCPv6 client. It supports both stateful (i.e. IPv6 address
 granting) as well as stateless (i.e. option granting) autoconfiguration
 modes of the DHCPv6 protocol. Besides basic capabilities, it supports
 various DHCPv6 extensions, e.g. option renewal. Install Dibbler client if
 this node should obtain IPv6 addresses and options from a DHCPv6 server.
 .
 Dibbler homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

Package: dibbler-relay
Description: portable DHCPv6 relay
 This is a DHCPv6 relay. Relays are used as proxies between servers and
 clients. Their main advantage is the ability to support multiple remote
 links using only one server. Install Dibbler relay if you want to serve
 multiple not physically connected links with one DHCPv6 server.
 .
 Dibbler homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

Package: dibbler-doc
Description: documentation for dibbler
 This package includes both user and developer documentation, covering all
 acpects of the Dibbler DHCPv6 implementation:
  - server, client and relay usage and configuration
  - various tips and frequently asked questions
  - internal structure/code description and hints for developers
 .
 Dibbler homepage: http://klub.com.pl/dhcpv6/

--- dibbler-client.templates ---
Template: dibbler-client/title
Type: title
Description: dibbler-client: DHCPv6 client

Template: dibbler-client/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
Description: Do you want dibbler-client to start when system starts?
 Dibbler client can be configured to start at boot, so your host will
 have IPv6 set up after boot. This is generally a good idea. Make sure
 that there is a DHCPv6 server available in your network.

Template: dibbler-client/interfaces
Type: string
Default: eth0
Description: Interfaces to be configured:
 Dibbler can configure any or all of a computer's network interfaces.
 .
 More than one interface may be specified by separating the
 interface names with spaces.

Template: dibbler-client/options
Type: multiselect
Choices: dns, domain
Default: dns
Description: What additional parameters should be obtained?
 The Dibbler client can request that the DHCPv6 server supply
 additional configuration parameters.

--- dibbler-server.templates ---
Template: dibbler-server/title
Type: title
Description: dibbler-server: DHCPv6 server

Template: dibbler-server/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
Description: Do you want dibbler-server to start when the system starts?
 Dibbler server can be configured to start at boot. Doing so, this node
 will act as a DHCPv6 server. It will provide IPv6 addresses and additional
 configuration options to other nodes in the network.

Template: dibbler-server/config
Type: note
Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/server.conf before running server.
 Without proper modifications, the Dibbler server will most likely
 offer invalid addresses and options when started.

--- dibbler-relay.templates ---
Template: dibbler-relay/title
Type: title
Description: dibbler-relay: DHCPv6 relay

Template: dibbler-relay/start
Type: boolean
Default: true
Description: Do you want dibbler-relay to start when the system starts?
 Dibbler relay can be configured to start at boot. Doing so, this node
 will forward DHCPv6 messages between clients, servers and other relays.

Template: dibbler-relay/config
Type: note
Description: Modify /etc/dibbler/relay.conf before running relay.
 Without proper modifications, relay most likely will refuse to
 start or will not forward DHCPv6 messages as expected.

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Thanks again for your support.

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