Re: debian-faq: notes on systemd obsolete
Hi Vincent e.a.,
On Thu, Nov 30, 2017 at 02:37:27PM +1100, Vincent McIntyre wrote:
> I have a few suggestions.
Great, thanks for proofreading: very helpful for a non-native speaker like me :)
Have applied all your suggestions as-is, except for:
> On Thu, Nov 30, 2017 at 03:36:53AM +0100, Joost van Baal-Ilić wrote:
> > Index: customizing.sgml
> > ===================================================================
> > --- customizing.sgml (revision 11724)
> > +++ customizing.sgml (working copy)
> > @@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
> > environment variable. For details, see the manual page
> > <manref name="papersize" section="5">.
> > +
> > <sect id="hardwareaccess">How can I provide access to hardware peripherals,
> > without compromising security?
> > +default target file <tt>/lib/systemd/system/default.target</tt>. The files for
> > +these services and targets are installed during Debian package installation.
> Missing text?:
> +Usually, a package providing a service controlled by systemd
> +will <i>enable</i> it at installation time.
changed that to:
The files for these services and targets are installed during Debian
package installation and the service provided by the package will be
<i>enabled</i>. If you explicitly do <i>not</i> wish to run a
packages service during boot-up, instead of removing the installed
package, you can run the command
PS: current version is, as always, available from
More proofreads welcome.