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Re: debian-faq



Hi,

Holger Wansing <linux@wansing-online.de> wrote:
> victory and Justin,
> 
> thanks for your suggestions. They are more than welcome. I will commit that
> soon.

Proposed patch attached.


Holger


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Index: choosing.sgml
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--- choosing.sgml	(Revision 11168)
+++ choosing.sgml	(Arbeitskopie)
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@
     unless they include release-critical (RC) bug fixes.
     <item>When testing is frozen, all the new bugfixes introduced, have to be
     manually checked by the members of the release team. This is done to ensure
-    that there wont be any unknown severe problems in the frozen
+    that there won't be any unknown severe problems in the frozen
     testing.
     <item>RC bugs in 'frozen testing' are reduced to either zero or, if
     greater than zero, the bugs are either marked as ignored for the release or
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@
 
 <p>Currently testing is called &testingreleasename;. So, if you change the third field of 
 <file>/etc/apt/sources.list</file> to '&testingreleasename;', then also you will be running
-testing. But when &testingreleasename; becomes stable, you will still be tracking &testingreleasename;.</p>
+testing. But even when &testingreleasename; becomes stable, you will still be tracking &testingreleasename;.</p>
 
 <p>Unstable is always called Sid. So if you change the third field of <file>
 /etc/apt/sources.list</file> to 'sid', then you will be tracking unstable.
Index: pkgtools.sgml
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--- pkgtools.sgml	(Revision 11168)
+++ pkgtools.sgml	(Arbeitskopie)
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
              system, run:
                <example>apt purge foo</example>
 
-       <item>To list all packages, for which newer package versions are
+       <item>To list all packages for which newer versions are
              available, run:
                <example>apt list --upgradable</example>
 
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
 Tasks can be installed through the <prgn/tasksel/ program or through
 <prgn/aptitude/.
 
-<p>The Debian installer will typically install automaticaly the task
+<p>Typically, the Debian installer will automatically install the task
 associated with a standard system and a desktop environment. The specific
 desktop environment installed will depend on the CD/DVD media used, most
 commonly it will be the GNOME desktop (<tt/gnome-desktop/ task).  Also,

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