Re: debian-faq

[Holger Wansing <linux@wansing-online.de>]

Hi,

Justin B Rye <justin.byam.rye@gmail.com> wrote:
> victory wrote:
> > #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:133
> > To list all packages, for which newer package versions are available, run:
> > 
> > 2nd "package" is redundant
> 
> And by English punctuation rules the comma shouldn't be there either.
>  
> > #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:272
> > The Debian installer will typically install automaticaly the task
> > 
> > automatical*l*y
> 
> And it's in the wrong place - you can't put the adverb between verb
> and object.  We could move it to the end of the sentence, but that's
> weak; better to move it to before the verb.  Of course this means it
> collides with the adverb that's already there, but *that* one can
> dodge to sentence-initial position:

victory and Justin,

thanks for your suggestions. They are more than welcome. I will commit that
soon.





victory <victory.deb@gmail.com> wrote:
> #: debian-faq.sgml:49 pkgtools.sgml:95
> ..
>  apt-get autoremove         ->  apt autoremove
> 
>   # LANG=C apt autoremove
>   E: Invalid operation autoremove
> (it's jessie here)

victory:
you are right for jessie, that command was added for the stretch version 
of apt.



Holger

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