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Bug#782695: Bug#782404: release-notes: re-proofreading



On 2015-04-18 21:43, Andreas Tille wrote:
> On Sat, Apr 18, 2015 at 08:13:29PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
>> My attempt:
>>
>> +    <para>The Debian Med team has again considerably increased not only the number
>> +    of packages in the fields of biology and medicine but also their quality in
>> +    terms of testing (at package build time as well as autopkgtest). These
>> +    enhancements in version 2.0 of the Debian Med Blend metapackages reflect the
>> +    demand from scientists for reliable software to provide reproducible results.
>> +    Visit the <ulink url="http://blends.debian.org/med/tasks";>Debian Med tasks
>> +    pages</ulink> to see the full range of biological and medical software in
>> +    Debian.
>>      </para>
>>  </section>
> 
> Way better than my version.  Thanks for the review
> 
>      Andreas.
> 

Thanks, I have applied the revised version.

~Niels


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