Bug#782695: Bug#782404: release-notes: re-proofreading
On 2015-04-18 21:43, Andreas Tille wrote:
> On Sat, Apr 18, 2015 at 08:13:29PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
>> My attempt:
>>
>> + <para>The Debian Med team has again considerably increased not only the number
>> + of packages in the fields of biology and medicine but also their quality in
>> + terms of testing (at package build time as well as autopkgtest). These
>> + enhancements in version 2.0 of the Debian Med Blend metapackages reflect the
>> + demand from scientists for reliable software to provide reproducible results.
>> + Visit the <ulink url="http://blends.debian.org/med/tasks">Debian Med tasks
>> + pages</ulink> to see the full range of biological and medical software in
>> + Debian.
>> </para>
>> </section>
>
> Way better than my version. Thanks for the review
>
> Andreas.
>
Thanks, I have applied the revised version.
~Niels
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