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Bug#782404: marked as done (release-notes: re-proofreading)

Your message dated Fri, 17 Apr 2015 08:54:50 +0200
with message-id <5530AE3A.3030104@thykier.net>
and subject line Re: Bug#782404: release-notes: re-proofreading
has caused the Debian Bug report #782404,
regarding release-notes: re-proofreading
to be marked as done.

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--- Begin Message --- 
Package: release-notes
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Revisions to issues.dbk introduce a couple of phrases that could
benefit from extra articles and maybe a change of preposition:

     For more information about the requirements, please refer to
-    section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
+    the section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
     url="https://sources.debian.net/src/systemd/jessie/README/";>README</ulink>
-    file of <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem> package.
+    file for the package <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem>.

(Meanwhile I'm following #780573 and see no problems with the new
material there yet.)
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

Index: issues.dbk
===================================================================
--- issues.dbk	(revision 10757)
+++ issues.dbk	(working copy)
@@ -516,9 +516,9 @@
   </para>
   <para>
     For more information about the requirements, please refer to
-    section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
+    the section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
     url="https://sources.debian.net/src/systemd/jessie/README/";>README</ulink>
-    file of <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem> package.
+    file for the package <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem>.
   </para>
 </section>

--- End Message ---
--- Begin Message --- 
On 2015-04-11 18:51, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Package: release-notes
> Severity: minor
> Tags: patch
> 
> Revisions to issues.dbk introduce a couple of phrases that could
> benefit from extra articles and maybe a change of preposition:
> 
>      For more information about the requirements, please refer to
> -    section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
> +    the section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
>      url="https://sources.debian.net/src/systemd/jessie/README/";>README</ulink>
> -    file of <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem> package.
> +    file for the package <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem>.
> 

Thanks, applied.

> (Meanwhile I'm following #780573 and see no problems with the new
> material there yet.)
> 

Sounds good. :)

I just applied the patch in #782695 and I hope I can convince you to
review it as well. :)

Thanks,
~Niels

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