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Bug#776190: release-notes: "This", not "That"

Package: release-notes
Severity: normal

		the third sentence in the release notes
https://www.debian.org/releases/jessie/ sounds a bit wierd:
"That means that things should not break..."

This sentence refers to the one immediately before, so "That" is
inappropriate.  Please use "This" or alternatively "It".
The Italian version has "Questo" and French has "Cela": these words mean
precisely "This", not "That", and convey the correct meaning.

All the best, and thanx for the great work!

-- System Information:
Debian Release: 8.0
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (100, 'stable'), (5, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 3.16.0-4-amd64 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=en_US.utf8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.utf8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Init: systemd (via /run/systemd/system)

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