Bug#776190: release-notes: "This", not "That" (on d.o/releases/jessie/)

[Niels Thykier <niels@thykier.net>]

Control: forwarded -1 debian-www@lists.debian.org

On 2015-01-25 10:59, Nick Manini wrote:
> Package: release-notes
> Severity: normal
> 
> Hello,
> 		the third sentence in the release notes
> https://www.debian.org/releases/jessie/ sounds a bit weird:
> "That means that things should not break..."
> 
> This sentence refers to the one immediately before, so "That" is
> inappropriate.  Please use "This" or alternatively "It".
> The Italian version has "Questo" and French has "Cela": these words mean
> precisely "This", not "That", and convey the correct meaning.
> 
> All the best, and thanx for the great work!
>     	      	  				Nick
> 
> [...]

Hi Nick,

Thanks for reporting this.

I am forwarding your request to debian-www@l.d.o as the page is
maintained by outside the "release-notes" source.

Thanks,
~Niels