Bug#776190: release-notes: "This", not "That" (on d.o/releases/jessie/)
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On 2015-01-25 10:59, Nick Manini wrote:
> Package: release-notes
> Severity: normal
> the third sentence in the release notes
> https://www.debian.org/releases/jessie/ sounds a bit weird:
> "That means that things should not break..."
> This sentence refers to the one immediately before, so "That" is
> inappropriate. Please use "This" or alternatively "It".
> The Italian version has "Questo" and French has "Cela": these words mean
> precisely "This", not "That", and convey the correct meaning.
> All the best, and thanx for the great work!
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