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Bug#608887: release-notes: Debian Documentation and Debian Wiki in Chapter 6



On Tue, Jan 11, 2011 at 09:24:19 -0600, Steve Langasek wrote:

> On Tue, Jan 04, 2011 at 09:11:26PM +0900, Osamu Aoki wrote:
> > @@ -55,7 +56,7 @@
> >  <para>
> >  Please follow the channel guidelines, respecting other users fully.  The
> >  guidelines are available at the <ulink
> > -url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki</ulink>.
> > +url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki: DebianIRC</ulink>.
> >  </para>
> >  <para>
> >  For more information on OFTC please visit the <ulink
> 
> I don't think this is an improvement.  The text does not read well; one
> would never say "The guidelines are available at the Debian Wiki:
> DebianIRC".  You could say "The guidelines are available at the DebianIRC
> page in the Debian wiki", but I think the original text was also perfectly
> fine.
> 
I reverted this hunk in r8092, thanks.

Cheers,
Julien

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