Bug#608887: release-notes: Debian Documentation and Debian Wiki in Chapter 6
On Tue, Jan 04, 2011 at 09:11:26PM +0900, Osamu Aoki wrote:
> @@ -55,7 +56,7 @@
> <para>
> Please follow the channel guidelines, respecting other users fully. The
> guidelines are available at the <ulink
> -url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki</ulink>.
> +url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki: DebianIRC</ulink>.
> </para>
> <para>
> For more information on OFTC please visit the <ulink
I don't think this is an improvement. The text does not read well; one
would never say "The guidelines are available at the Debian Wiki:
DebianIRC". You could say "The guidelines are available at the DebianIRC
page in the Debian wiki", but I think the original text was also perfectly
fine.
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