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Bug#608887: release-notes: Debian Documentation and Debian Wiki in Chapter 6

On Tue, Jan 04, 2011 at 09:11:26PM +0900, Osamu Aoki wrote:
> @@ -55,7 +56,7 @@
>  <para>
>  Please follow the channel guidelines, respecting other users fully.  The
>  guidelines are available at the <ulink
> -url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki</ulink>.
> +url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki: DebianIRC</ulink>.
>  </para>
>  <para>
>  For more information on OFTC please visit the <ulink

I don't think this is an improvement.  The text does not read well; one
would never say "The guidelines are available at the Debian Wiki:
DebianIRC".  You could say "The guidelines are available at the DebianIRC
page in the Debian wiki", but I think the original text was also perfectly

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Debian Developer                   to set it on, and I can move the world.
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