Re: [PATCH] Fix duplicating "of" in the release notes
On Wed, Nov 08, 2006 at 11:24:09PM +0900, Kobayashi Noritada wrote:
> I found a duplicating "of" in the release notes. This mistake seems
> to have been introduced at 1.69.2.9. I don't know which of the
> following two was the reason:
>
> * intended to keep "the number of", but wrongly deleted "the number"
> * intended to delete "the number of", but wrongly left "of"
>
> This patch provides correction assuming the latter, deleting one "of".
> Index: release-notes.en.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/debian-doc/ddp/manuals.sgml/release-notes/en/release-notes.en.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.77
> diff -u -r1.77 release-notes.en.sgml
> --- release-notes.en.sgml 6 Nov 2006 21:55:22 -0000 1.77
> +++ release-notes.en.sgml 8 Nov 2006 14:20:52 -0000
> @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
> than its predecessor &oldreleasename;; the distribution includes
> over 9000 new packages. Most of the software in the distribution
> has been updated: almost 6500 software packages (this is 73% of
> - of packages in &oldreleasename;). Also, a significant number
> + packages in &oldreleasename;). Also, a significant number
I changed it to
all packages in &oldreleasename;). Also, a significant number
I hope this is OK.
> of packages have for various reasons been removed from the distribution.
> You will not see any updates for these packages and they will be
> marked as 'obsolete' in package management front-ends.</p>
Thanks,
Jens
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