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[PATCH] Fix duplicating "of" in the release notes



Hi,

I found a duplicating "of" in the release notes.  This mistake seems
to have been introduced at 1.69.2.9.  I don't know which of the
following two was the reason:

* intended to keep "the number of", but wrongly deleted "the number"
* intended to delete "the number of", but wrongly left "of"

This patch provides correction assuming the latter, deleting one "of".

Thanks,

-nori
Index: release-notes.en.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/debian-doc/ddp/manuals.sgml/release-notes/en/release-notes.en.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.77
diff -u -r1.77 release-notes.en.sgml
--- release-notes.en.sgml	6 Nov 2006 21:55:22 -0000	1.77
+++ release-notes.en.sgml	8 Nov 2006 14:20:52 -0000
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
            than its predecessor &oldreleasename;; the distribution includes
            over 9000 new packages. Most of the software in the distribution
            has been updated: almost 6500 software packages (this is 73% of
-           of packages in &oldreleasename;). Also, a significant number
+           packages in &oldreleasename;). Also, a significant number
            of packages have for various reasons been removed from the distribution.
            You will not see any updates for these packages and they will be
            marked as 'obsolete' in package management front-ends.</p>

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