Re: Amendment to the Constitution: Add a new foundation document
Manoj Srivastava <srivasta@debian.org> writes:
> >> We affirm that whenever a change to the Social Contract, or the
> >> Constitution, takes place, the activities required to provide
> >> ongoing and proactive support for the Debian user community shall
> >> continue. This includes, but is not necessarily limited to,
> >> providing security updates for previously-released versions of
> >> Debian, providing point-release updates to previously-released
> >> versions of Debian, preparing for the next (compliant) release of
> >> Debian, actually releasing the current non-compliant version of
> >> Debian if such a release is imminent (as well as any further
> >> updates to that version of Debian), as well as providing all the
> >> Project's infrastructure such as bug-tracking and mailing lists.
>
> > Suggest "and" before the "actually" (comma-separated lists usually
> > say "A, B, C, and D"). I guess it isn't there because of "as well
> > as", but I'd put it there anyway.
>
> Doesn't sound right to me when I speak it aloud. I would like
> some other opinions on this as well.
I would suggest replacing "as well as" with "and".
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