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Re: Suggested press release in reaction to RHAT dropping sparc and alpha

On Sun, Dec 22, 2002 at 06:47:23PM -0500, Jaldhar H. Vyas wrote:
> Ok here is the revised version:

A few corrections:

> The Debian Project (http://www.debian.org/) producers of Debian GNU/Linux,
                                             ^ insert comma
> the premier Linux distribution created by the community for the community

Probably another comma here.

> reaffirmed today its' ongoing commitment to supporting Linux on the Sparc
                   ^^^^ "it's"
> and Alpha architectures.
> Sparc and Alpha users enjoy the same vast breadth of free software (some
> 10,000 packages in our stable distribution,) bug fixes, and timely
                                            ^^ transpose
> security updates as any other Debian user.  Debian, as an all volunteer
                                       ^^^^ "users"
> organization can afford to support any architecture for which there is
> sufficient community interest.  This should promise a long healthy life
                                       perhaps just "promises"
> for our both our Alpha and Sparc binary distributions
      ^^^ delete                                       ^ add a full stop

Looks like a really good idea to me otherwise, though.


Colin Watson                                  [cjwatson@flatline.org.uk]

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