Re: Suggested press release in reaction to RHAT dropping sparc and alpha
On Sun, Dec 22, 2002 at 06:47:23PM -0500, Jaldhar H. Vyas wrote:
> Ok here is the revised version:
A few corrections:
> The Debian Project (http://www.debian.org/) producers of Debian GNU/Linux,
^ insert comma
> the premier Linux distribution created by the community for the community
Probably another comma here.
> reaffirmed today its' ongoing commitment to supporting Linux on the Sparc
^^^^ "it's"
> and Alpha architectures.
>
> Sparc and Alpha users enjoy the same vast breadth of free software (some
> 10,000 packages in our stable distribution,) bug fixes, and timely
^^ transpose
> security updates as any other Debian user. Debian, as an all volunteer
^^^^ "users"
> organization can afford to support any architecture for which there is
> sufficient community interest. This should promise a long healthy life
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
perhaps just "promises"
> for our both our Alpha and Sparc binary distributions
^^^ delete ^ add a full stop
Looks like a really good idea to me otherwise, though.
Cheers,
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Colin Watson [cjwatson@flatline.org.uk]
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