Re: Constitution - formal proposal (v0.5)

[Ian Jackson <ian@chiark.greenend.org.uk>]

GSteve Greenland writes ("Re: Constitution - formal proposal (v0.5)"):
...
> The first sentence of this paragraph repeats the previous sentence, and 
> in my opinion more clearly. Perhaps both paragraphs can be combined:
> 
> 
>     The Debian Project is an association of individuals who have made
>     common cause to create a free operating system. This document
>     describes the organisational structure for formal decisionmaking in
>     the Project. It does not describe the goals of the Project or how
>     it achieves them, or contain any specific nontechnical policies not
>     directly related to the decisionmaking process.
> 
> Or perhaps the first sentence should be in its own paragraph, since it
> is not really on the same topic.

Fixed this.  It's still two paragraphs, but the first is just the
first sentence - and I've marked it as rationale.

Ian.


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