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Re: second attempt to fix this issue



On Fri, Mar 30, 2007 at 11:24:09PM +0200, Frans Pop wrote:
> On Friday 30 March 2007 22:57, Steve Langasek wrote:
> > The meaning of the original sentence is

> >   It will guess *that* the broadcast address is the bitwise OR of your
> >   system's IP address with the bitwise negation of the netmask.

> > which in turn suggests to me an improvement,

> >   It will *assume* that the broadcast address is the bitwise OR...

> As it is only used as a default, I would say "assume" is not an 
> improvement as "assume" implies that weird things could happen if the 
> assumption is incorrect.

Ok, in that case I would suggest getting rid of the indeterminate subject
altogether and writing:

  The default broadcast address is the bitwise OR of your system's IP
  address with the bitwise negation of the netmask.

or

  The default broadcast address offered [...]

> A possible improvement would be "... it will calculate the broadcast 
> address as ...", but I've just reverted back to the original text as IMO 
> that is fine too.

Yeah, the original is hardly broken, but so long as attention has been drawn
to it... :)

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Steve Langasek                   Give me a lever long enough and a Free OS
Debian Developer                   to set it on, and I can move the world.
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