On Monday 10 January 2005 11:35, Javier Fernández-Sanguino Peña wrote:
> I've added this information but restructured it a bit. It should be
> available in the next webwml run so please verify it in 6-8 hours.
Thanks for doing the update Javier.
I see you left the info for Woody's manual. I can see the benefits of
that, especially as Sarge has not yet been released.
However, it makes the introductory paragraph not fit with what follows; it
also makes the links included in the introduction redundant.
IMHO it would be better to remove the info for Woody, especially as that
version of the manual is no longer maintained.
The info on "CVS sources working copy" and <CVS via web> for Woody should
be removed in any case. Both are obsolete. I have no idea if a source
version of Woody's manual is still available anywhere.
Some minor remarks:
- The title we use for the manual is "Debian Installation Guide"
^^^^^
- Would it be possible to have a <br> after "Anonymous checkout:"?
That would increase the chance of the full svn co statement being shown
on one line
- Would it be possible to make the Web interface link into a proper
clickable link?
TIA,
Frans Pop
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