On Tue, Jan 11, 2005 at 07:12:06PM +0100, Frans Pop wrote: > On Monday 10 January 2005 11:35, Javier Fernández-Sanguino Peña wrote: > > I've added this information but restructured it a bit. It should be > > available in the next webwml run so please verify it in 6-8 hours. > > Thanks for doing the update Javier. > > I see you left the info for Woody's manual. I can see the benefits of > that, especially as Sarge has not yet been released. > However, it makes the introductory paragraph not fit with what follows; it > also makes the links included in the introduction redundant. Then we could split that information in two. Have a "Debian installation Guide" and then a "Debian Installation Manual" > IMHO it would be better to remove the info for Woody, especially as that > version of the manual is no longer maintained. Even if it's not maintained, users might still be looking for it. > The info on "CVS sources working copy" and <CVS via web> for Woody should > be removed in any case. Both are obsolete. I have no idea if a source > version of Woody's manual is still available anywhere. You are right. It does not work, seems it was moved over somewhere else. > > > Some minor remarks: > - The title we use for the manual is "Debian Installation Guide" > ^^^^^ Fixed. > - Would it be possible to have a <br> after "Anonymous checkout:"? > That would increase the chance of the full svn co statement being shown > on one line Done. > - Would it be possible to make the Web interface link into a proper > clickable link? > Done. > TIA, I've commited the changes, please review the web pages. There are still some things that need to be changed, but it looks better now IMHO. Regards Javier
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