[Debconf-team] Fwd: Re: DC18 brochure & flyer final review

[znoteer@mailbox.org]

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De : znoteer@mailbox.org
À :  Gunnar Wolf <gwolf@debian.org>
Date : 9 octobre 2017 à 18:42
Sujet : Re: [Debconf-team] DC18 brochure & flyer final review
> Le 9 octobre 2017 à 12:25, Gunnar Wolf <gwolf@debian.org> a écrit :
> 
> 
[snip]
> Questions as a non-native English speaker:
> 
> - The caption on page 4's picture, shouldn't it be "...updating ON
>   Debian status", "giving an update on Debian's status", or something
>   like it? It's not as if Chris updated Debian's status by delivering
>   a talk.

Good catch.  I would suggest "Chris Lamb, Debian Project Leader, giving a status update at Debconf17."  I include this suggestion when I fix some regressions in a a few hours.

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