On Sun, Sep 10, 2017 at 12:04:09PM +0200, Martin Zobel-Helas wrote:
> First of all, the brochure looks nice, but i have few things to
> criticise.
>
> Page 1:
> I counted 5 different font sizes and mix of bold and no bold fonts and
> a mix 1.5 and 1 line spacing: This makes the page very
> restless/fidgety to read. Try to avoid this by reducing the number of
> font sizes and line spacing options.
>
> The indenting of this page is different to the one on the other pages.
> Given that this page is the cover page this is probably okay, but it
> looks a bit strange compared to the remaining pages, which have less
> indenting and a smaller font size.
Need some help about this part. I am not so familiar with Latex.
> Page 2:
> This page is only half filled. Use the remaining space. Either use the
> space with a picture, or maybe if the conference is held at a
> university (wiki page for DC18 and page 4 suggest so) as the dean for
> a statement why he thinks DebConf18 at the university is a good thing.
In DC17, there is a orga team picture. I will check if there is any
suitable picture here.
>
> Page 3:
> Last section, second sentence, you do a paragraph break in the middle
> of the sentence. Why?
Caused by comment at the wrong place. Fixed in git.
> Page 4:
> I am not a native english speaker, but the word-line-breaking for
> "partic-ipants" (3rd paragraph) looks very strange to me.
Looks like it breaks automatically by latex. Not sure if this break is
reasonable or not.
> Page 6:
> I would use a different wording for the caption for the picture. eg.
> Participants with T-Shirts from all past DebConfs.
Thanks for the suggestion. Fixed in git.
> Page 7:
> You do not use a third of a page! Either add content or a picture.
Good idea. Will fix a suitable picture here.
> Page 8:
> Maybe not use the same quotes of our sponsors all and all over again.
> Ask sponsors for DebConf17 to send you new quotes?
>
>
> Cheers,
> Martin
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