On Tue, Oct 29, 2002 at 10:47:06PM +0100, Mika Fischer wrote: > --- > The UnrealIRCd Team reserves the right to modify this agreement at anytime as > long as notice is given on the unrealircd.com main page at least 24 hours > before changes take effect. The modified agreement will only effect new > downloads, downloads completed before the new agreement takes effect will > still be governed by the agreement that was accepted by the end user at the > original time of download. > --- > > If the last paragraph of the original EULA was changed to this one, would > there be any more problems? I see a comma splice; they need to change that last comma to a semicolon.[1] Other than that, there is nothing objectionable about this language. However, the requirement of a click-through license acceptance ceremony is still problematic, if it in fact it is a requirement, which remains unclear. [1] Yes, it's a minor point, but poor grammar degrades clarity. One wants clarity in legal language even more than in regular conversation. -- G. Branden Robinson | Good judgement comes from Debian GNU/Linux | experience; experience comes from branden@debian.org | bad judgement. http://people.debian.org/~branden/ | -- Fred Brooks
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