Hi Thanks Paul for reviewing again! El 27/03/15 a las 02:40, Paul Wise escribió: > On Fri, Mar 27, 2015 at 3:10 AM, Laura Arjona Reina wrote: > >>> I'd also replace "HP hardware donations" with "current HP hardware donations". > > The patch is missing this one. > Yes, I missed it. Fixed. >> I'm attaching a new patch that I hope it's ok. > > I'm being pedantic now, but the patch adds some unnessecary whitespace > on the blank line. > I think that's solved in the attached patch. Best -- Laura Arjona https://wiki.debian.org/LauraArjona
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