Re: More typos in website
On Fri, Mar 26, 2004 at 01:41:30PM +1100, Pascal Hakim wrote:
> On Fri, 2004-03-26 at 12:50, Matt Kraai wrote:
> > > Index: events/requirements.wml
> > > ===================================================================
> > > RCS file: /cvs/webwml/webwml/english/events/requirements.wml,v
> > > retrieving revision 1.4
> > > diff -u -r1.4 requirements.wml
> > > --- events/requirements.wml 25 Jul 2002 19:05:30 -0000 1.4
> > > +++ events/requirements.wml 26 Mar 2004 00:23:24 -0000
> > > @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
> > >
> > > <p>In short, such a booth would be look very poor. It is quite
> > > questionable whether this would demonstrate the high level of an
> > > -exhibition, poor project or display that the organizers don't have
> > > +exhibition, it displays that the organizers don't have
> > > money or don't want to spend money on free software projects.
> > > </p>
> > >
> >
> > Why? The original isn't elegant, but it doesn't seem incorrect.
>
> You need to, at the very least, do a s/would be/would/ on the first
> line.
Done.
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