On Fri, 2004-03-26 at 12:50, Matt Kraai wrote: > > Index: events/requirements.wml > > =================================================================== > > RCS file: /cvs/webwml/webwml/english/events/requirements.wml,v > > retrieving revision 1.4 > > diff -u -r1.4 requirements.wml > > --- events/requirements.wml 25 Jul 2002 19:05:30 -0000 1.4 > > +++ events/requirements.wml 26 Mar 2004 00:23:24 -0000 > > @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ > > > > <p>In short, such a booth would be look very poor. It is quite > > questionable whether this would demonstrate the high level of an > > -exhibition, poor project or display that the organizers don't have > > +exhibition, it displays that the organizers don't have > > money or don't want to spend money on free software projects. > > </p> > > > > Why? The original isn't elegant, but it doesn't seem incorrect. You need to, at the very least, do a s/would be/would/ on the first line. That page could probably be improved a little however, it seems very awkward in a number of places. Cheers, Pasc -- Pascal Hakim Do Not Bend
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