Re: Debian WWW CVS commit by danish: webwml/english/events material.wml
On Wed, Dec 26, 2001 at 12:46:59PM +0100, Javier Fernández-Sanguino Peña wrote:
>
> -provide flyers. Flyers have the ability to solve many questions will
> -have in mind regarding Debian, can entice them to contribute and it's
> -paper they can take notes in! All in all, they are pretty useful.
> +provide flyers. Flyers have the ability to solve many questions
> +regarding to Debian, can entice people to contribute and for it's
> +paper they can take notes on it! All in all, they are pretty useful.</p>
> <<<
How about:
Flyers can answer many questions about Debian, can entice people to
contribute, and can be used to take notes!
Regardless, the 'to' between 'regarding' and 'Debian' should be removed.
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James (Jay) Treacy
treacy@debian.org
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