Bug#239548: ITP: gnome-keyring -- gnome keyring system is a program that keep password and other secrets for

[Steve Greenland <steveg@moregruel.net>]

There's still a few minor problems. 

On 23-Mar-04, 07:22 (CST), Ond?ej Sur? <ondrej@sury.org> wrote: 
> Updated Description: program that keep passwords and other secrets
>  gnome-keyring is a daemon in the session, similar to ssh-agent, and
>  other applications can locate it by an environment variable.

Consider this:

Description: store passwords and other secrets securely

At a minimum, change "that keep" to "that keeps".

English sentences always begin with a capital letter; you can avoid
the annoyance of capitalizing a file name by using the project name,
e.g. "Gnome Keyring is a daemon", but there's nothing wrong with
"Gnome-keyring is a ...", either.

You might want to put the first paragraph second: it is more important
to know what it does than how it does it. And actually, I'm still not
sure whether gnome-keyring is a GUI front end or a back end that other
packages can use (which other packages?), or both.

Regards,
Steve
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