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Re: RFD: amendment of Debian Social Contract

On Thu, Oct 30, 2003 at 02:04:40AM +0200, Richard Braakman wrote:
> I've created an HTML version of the amendment that I find easier to
> read and understand than the wdiff output.  It's available at
> http://www.xs4all.nl/~dark/draft-sc-amendment-20031030.html
> I've used <ins> and <del> tags to mark insertions and deletions, and
> I tried to split them into more logical chunks than wdiff chose.
> I have also added stylesheet directives to color the insertions and
> deletions differently.

Thanks Richard, this is very helpful. It's similar to what you can get
with 'wdiff -p' or 'wdiff -l' and much more readable than the default

Also, in the first sentence in the second section, the proposed text
reads: "we will license them as freely in a manner consistent with the
Debian Free Software Guidelines." I think there is a residual "as" in
there. You could probably lose the "as freely" and just have it say
"we will license them in a manner..." and it would make sense.


Benjamin Mako Hill

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