On Thu, Oct 30, 2003 at 02:04:40AM +0200, Richard Braakman wrote: > I've created an HTML version of the amendment that I find easier to > read and understand than the wdiff output. It's available at > > http://www.xs4all.nl/~dark/draft-sc-amendment-20031030.html > > I've used <ins> and <del> tags to mark insertions and deletions, and > I tried to split them into more logical chunks than wdiff chose. > I have also added stylesheet directives to color the insertions and > deletions differently. Thanks Richard, this is very helpful. It's similar to what you can get with 'wdiff -p' or 'wdiff -l' and much more readable than the default output. Also, in the first sentence in the second section, the proposed text reads: "we will license them as freely in a manner consistent with the Debian Free Software Guidelines." I think there is a residual "as" in there. You could probably lose the "as freely" and just have it say "we will license them in a manner..." and it would make sense. Regards, Mako -- Benjamin Mako Hill mako@debian.org http://mako.yukidoke.org/
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