Re: Proposed ballot for the constitutional amendment
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Manoj Srivastava wrote:
> Comments and feedback appreciated.
> In the brackets next to your preferred choice, place a 1. Place a 2 in
> the brackets next to your next choice. Do not enter a number smaller
> than 1 or larger than 2. You may rank options equally (as long as all
> choices X you make fall in the range 1<= X <= 2).
Obviously, you mean between one and five, as there are that many options.
> Proposal A: The actual text of the proposal A is:
"Actual text"? As opposed to what? Maybe you mean the complete text, or
perhaps leave the adjective off altogether... Also, you don't need the
second "the".
> Proposal B: The actual text of the Proposal B is:
ditto
> Proposal C: The actual text of the Proposal C is:
AOL.
Also, it might be nice to include a small summary of the effect of each of
the proposals. For example:
A: Clarifies status of non-technical documents. Creates Foundation
Documents class which requires 3:1 majority to change and includes the
Social Contract and the DFSG.
B: Clarifies status of non-technical documents. Does *not* create a class
of Foundation Documents.
C: Clarifies status of non-technical documents. Creates Foundation
Documents class which requires 3:1 majority to change and includes _only_
the Social Contract, and *not* the DFSG.
Additionally, you might want to note somewhere in the ballot that all
three of these proposals require a 3:1 super-majority in order to pass (as
they modify the constitution).
Hope this helps!
Joe Nahmias
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