Bug#707078: minor typos in package descriptions
Justin B Rye wrote:
> There are a couple more than you noticed.
Oops, and I sent mine too soon, too.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
diff -ru kdeartwork-4.8.4.pristine/debian/control kdeartwork-4.8.4/debian/control
--- kdeartwork-4.8.4.pristine/debian/control 2013-01-26 15:48:00.000000000 +0000
+++ kdeartwork-4.8.4/debian/control 2013-05-07 13:44:00.694167176 +0100
@@ -100,17 +100,18 @@
Replaces: kmouth (<< 4:4.6)
Breaks: kmouth (<< 4:4.6)
Description: monochromatic icons theme
- A monochromatic icon theme, designed for accessibility purposes.
+ A monochromatic icons theme, designed for accessibility.
.
- This package is part of the KDE accessibility module
+ This package is part of the KDE accessibility module.
Package: kdeartwork-theme-window
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Replaces: kde-window-manager (<< 4:4.5.80)
Breaks: kde-window-manager (<< 4:4.5.80)
-Description: window decoration for the K Window manager (KWin)
- This package contains additional window decorations for K Window Manager
+Description: window decorations for the K Window Manager (KWin)
+ This package contains additional window decorations for the K Window
+ Manager.
.
This package is part of the KDE artwork module.
@@ -119,7 +120,7 @@
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: widget styles for applications using Qt or KDE Development Platform
- Currently it provides the following themes:
+ Currently it provides the following theme:
* phase
.
This package is part of the KDE artwork module.
@@ -129,11 +130,11 @@
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, kde-workspace-bin
Recommends: kde-window-manager, kscreensaver-xsavers (= ${binary:Version})
-Description: Additional screensavers for KScreenSaver
+Description: additional screensavers for KScreenSaver
This package contains screensavers for KScreenSaver.
.
- KScreenSaver can use XScreenSaver collection of screensavers with the
- 'kscreensaver-xsavers' package.
+ Installing kscreensaver-xsavers lets KScreenSaver also use the
+ XScreenSaver collection of screensavers.
.
This package is part of the KDE artwork module.
@@ -143,7 +144,7 @@
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, kde-workspace-bin, xscreensaver-data, xscreensaver-data-extra, xscreensaver-screensaver-bsod
Recommends: kde-window-manager, kscreensaver (= ${binary:Version}), xscreensaver-gl, xscreensaver-gl-extra
Suggests: kscreensaver-xsavers-webcollage (= ${source:Version})
-Description: xscreensaver support for KScreenSaver
+Description: XScreenSaver support for KScreenSaver
This package allows KScreenSaver to use the XScreenSaver collection of
screensavers.
.
@@ -155,9 +156,9 @@
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, kscreensaver-xsavers (>= ${source:Version}), xscreensaver-screensaver-webcollage, miscfiles, netpbm
Description: webcollage screensaver support for KScreenSaver
This package allows KScreenSaver to use the WebCollage screensaver, which
- downloads random pictures from the internet to create a collage.
+ downloads random pictures from the Internet to create a collage.
.
- IMPORTANT NOTICE: The internet contains all kinds of pictures, some of which
+ IMPORTANT NOTICE: the Internet contains all kinds of pictures, some of which
might be found inappropriate or offensive.
It is recommended that this screensaver not be used a public environment,
workplace, or where it may be seen by children.
@@ -172,7 +173,8 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: desktop themes for KDE Plasma Workspaces
- This package include several desktops theme to change Plasma look and feel
+ This package includes several desktop themes to change Plasma's look
+ and feel.
.
This package is part of the KDE artwork module.
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