Hi!
Thanks for the review. I've just applied the suggestions.
On Sun, Sep 07, 2025 at 06:49:14PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Emmanuel Arias wrote:
> > Please, could you review it? Any comments, corrections etc. is welcome.
> >
> > https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/bits/-/merge_requests/119/diffs
>
> Comments and an attached diff.
>
> DebConf26 is already in the air in Argentina. DebConf in Argentina is giving us
> an opportunity to talk about Debian Argentina again. This is not the first time
> -that Debian came to Argentina, we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.
> +that Debian has come to Argentina: we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.
>
> (Aspect fix)
>
> -We happily received to Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera to visit the
> -venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we can
> -make some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:
> +We happily welcomed Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera visiting the
> +venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we could
> +have some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:
>
> I assume this is what it's trying to say; I'm not sure what "our first
> stop" means here or exactly where the "can" comes into it.
What I meant is that, before going to Santa Fe, where DebConf will take place,
we had a 'small event' in Buenos Aires where we gave some talks.
> --
> JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
> sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
> --- bits-from-argentina-august.md.orig 2025-09-07 18:34:25.217124446 +0100
> +++ bits-from-argentina-august.md 2025-09-07 18:39:11.141283126 +0100
> @@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
>
> DebConf26 is already in the air in Argentina. DebConf in Argentina is giving us
> an opportunity to talk about Debian Argentina again. This is not the first time
> -that Debian came to Argentina, we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.
> +that Debian has come to Argentina: we had DebConf 8 in 2008 in Mar del Plata.
>
> -We happily received to Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera to visit the
> -venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we can
> -make some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:
> +We happily welcomed Nattie Mayer-Hutchings and Stefano Rivera visiting the
> +venue, but our first stop was at 27th in Buenos Aires, Argentina where we could
> +have some talks in [GCoop](https://www.gcoop.coop/). The talks were:
>
> - ¿Qué es Debian? - Pablo Gonzalez (sultanovich) / Emmanuel Arias
> - [Cooperativismo y Software Libre](http://osiux.com/2022-10-20-howto-migrate-6300-hosts-to-gnu-linux-using-ansible-and-awx.html) - Osiux (gcoop)
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cheers,
Emmanuel Arias
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