Hi again El 14/03/17 a las 16:17, Hans-Christoph Steiner escribió:
Ok! I incorporated your feedback, and there is a new merge request of two commits: https://gitlab.com/eighthave/publicity/commit/b9424de7f0be4c3c14689e5a3bb9de09b56b793c https://gitlab.com/eighthave/publicity/commit/8520028c74a32c40b3c5231a3914a28899f47841
I've merged them, plus some minor changes (wrap lines to ease diffs and translations, and make links in markdown style).
Please have a look again and how it would look like: https://bits.debian.org/drafts/build-android-apps-with-debian.htmland ping us (by mail or in IRC) if you think it's ok for publishing, and I'll try to publish it ASAP.
Cheers
.hc 殷啟聰:Thanks for the review! Ah, I was in the context of writing to a public mailing list so "we" was used. As for the content of this part of the release notes, it might be a good idea if we also mention that the whole SDK toolset is available on ARM and MIPS machines, which is definitely an advantage over Google's proprietary bundle and makes our packages the only choince of a certain portion of users. Also, although readers can find out how to contact Android Tools Team from the wiki page, maybe it's also slightly better to explicitly tell readers to drop by #debian-mobile in the release notes? Cheers, Kai-Chung Yan 2017-03-14 1:02 GMT+08:00 Hans-Christoph Steiner <hans@eds.org>:Good feedback. I removed the "reverse engineering/apt install" line because it was just tacked on to the article. And I replaced the use of "we" in the whole article. Here's my update: https://gitlab.com/eighthave/publicity/commit/8520028c74a32c40b3c5231a3914a28899f47841 .hc Laura Arjona Reina:Hi all Hans-Christoph Steiner provided today a draft for a blog post "Build Android apps with Debian: apt install android-sdk", which is available in these URLs, for now https://bits.debian.org/drafts/build-android-apps-with-debian.html Source: https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/publicity/bits.git/tree/content/2017/build-android-apps-with-debian.md First I'd like to thank Hans-Christoph Steiner and Kai-Chung Yan for writing the article, it's very good news! I have some comments, that would apply both for this article and also for any article in bits. 1.- As a reader, I feel a bit confused when I read "we" in the blog posts: I'm not sure if here it refers to the article authors, to the Debian Android Tools Team, to Debian as a project... 2.- I would swap the two last paragraphs, leaving for the end the one that begins with "Last but not least, we want feedback". It would be good to state how to provide that feedback, too (e.g. contact the Debian Android Teams in the channels listed in https://wiki.debian.org/AndroidTools, or whatever). I'll try to rebuild the blog ASAP when I notice further commits, so the draft that can be seen in bits.debian.org reflects the current state, all the time. About date of publishing, I will take 2017-03-14 12:00 (UTC) more or less, as the article states. If you prefer other day/time, just commit the change. Good work! Cheers -- Laura Arjona Reina https://wiki.debian.org/LauraArjona
-- Laura Arjona Reina https://wiki.debian.org/LauraArjona