Re: draft for bits.d.o: Build Android apps with Debian: apt install android-sdk
Good feedback. I removed the "reverse engineering/apt install" line
because it was just tacked on to the article. And I replaced the use of
"we" in the whole article. Here's my update:
https://gitlab.com/eighthave/publicity/commit/8520028c74a32c40b3c5231a3914a28899f47841
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Laura Arjona Reina:
> Hi all
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> Hans-Christoph Steiner provided today a draft for a blog post "Build Android apps with Debian: apt install android-sdk", which is available in these URLs, for now
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> https://bits.debian.org/drafts/build-android-apps-with-debian.html
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> Source:
> https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/publicity/bits.git/tree/content/2017/build-android-apps-with-debian.md
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> First I'd like to thank Hans-Christoph Steiner and Kai-Chung Yan for writing the article, it's very good news!
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> I have some comments, that would apply both for this article and also for any article in bits.
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> 1.- As a reader, I feel a bit confused when I read "we" in the blog posts: I'm not sure if here it refers to the article authors, to the Debian Android Tools Team, to Debian as a project...
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> 2.- I would swap the two last paragraphs, leaving for the end the one that begins with "Last but not least, we want feedback". It would be good to state how to provide that feedback, too (e.g. contact the Debian Android Teams in the channels listed in https://wiki.debian.org/AndroidTools, or whatever).
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> I'll try to rebuild the blog ASAP when I notice further commits, so the draft that can be seen in bits.debian.org reflects the current state, all the time.
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> About date of publishing, I will take 2017-03-14 12:00 (UTC) more or less, as the article states. If you prefer other day/time, just commit the change.
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> Good work!
> Cheers
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> --
> Laura Arjona Reina
> https://wiki.debian.org/LauraArjona
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