Re: [announcement] mourn of Ian Murdock
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Hi Holger
Thanks for your suggestions.
I've integrated them in the current text, details follow.
El 03/01/16 a las 14:36, Holger Wansing escribió:
>
> Strictly spoken, Ians cite ends after "release of Debian" in the
> second line, so the closing tag </q> needs to be moved from the
> last line to the second line.
>
Correct, fixed.
> <p> [...] Debian has sparked an interest in so many users and
> people, then, now, and hopefully far into the future. From the
> bottom of our hearts, we thank you Ian. </p>
>
> First: "many users and people" seems strange to me. Probably use
> something like many people many users and developers many users and
> other people
>
I agree with you, I've changed it to "many users, contributors,
developers, and general public" but not so convinced about it...
> Second: I would suggest to make the last line a separate
> paragraph, to strengten its output (as it is written in the
> source; so add a </p><p> line before "From the bottom of our
> hearts, ..." )
>
Done.
Thanks again
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Laura Arjona Reina
https://wiki.debian.org/LauraArjona
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