[announcement] mourn of Ian Murdock

[Holger Wansing <linux@wansing-online.de>]

Hi,

[ please CC me on replies ] 


I have just translated the announcement of Ians passing into German
(current translation status: in review, do not publish)

Therefore I have some comments:

	<p>
	Ian Murdock also notes that Debian 0.93R6 <q>... has always been my
	favorite release of Debian", although he admits to the possibility of
	some personal bias, as he stopped actively working on the project in
	March 1996.</q>
	</p>

Strictly spoken, Ians cite ends after "release of Debian" in the
second line, so the closing tag </q> needs to be moved from the
last line to the second line.

	<p>
	[...]
	Debian has sparked 
	an interest in so many users and people, then, now, and hopefully far
	into the future.
	
	From the bottom of our hearts, we thank you Ian.
	</p>

First:	"many users and people" seems strange to me.
	Probably use something like
	many people
	many users and developers
	many users and other people

Second:	I would suggest to make the last line a separate paragraph,
	to strengten its output (as it is written in the source;
	so add a 
	</p><p>
	line before "From the bottom of our hearts, ..." )



Greetings
Holger


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