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Re: Request for review post: Tails installer is now in Debian


On Dienstag, 9. Februar 2016, u wrote:
> In your patches though, beware, jessie-backports is missing the last "s"
> and Amnesic Incognito Live System should be lowercased.

another patch attached.

From 424252775753bd340fd8e3a6415cfc06e5ac9e69 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 15:33:41 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] fixup patches as pointed out by u

 content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
index 681a9cd..ea79747 100644
--- a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
+++ b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Author: u
 Tags: tails, privacy, anonymity, announce
 Status: draft
-"The Amnesic Incognito Live System" ([Tails][tails-link]) is a live OS based
+"The amnesic incognito live system" ([Tails][tails-link]) is a live OS based
 on Debian GNU/Linux which aims at preserving the user's privacy and anonymity
 by using the Internet anonymously and circumventing censorship. Installed on
 a USB device, it is configured to leave no trace on the computer you are using
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ in Debian thanks to the [Debian Privacy Tools Maintainers Team][team-link].
 Tails Installer is a [graphical tool][screenshot] to install or upgrade Tails
 on a USB stick from an ISO image. It aims at making it easier and faster to get
-The Amnesic Incognito Live System up and running.
+The amnesic incognito live system up and running.
 The previous process for getting started with Tails was very complex and was
 problematic for less tech-savvy users. It  required starting Tails three
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ times, and copying the full ISO image onto a USB stick twice before having a
 fully functional Tails USB stick with persistence enabled.
 This can now be done simply by installing and running Tails Installer in your
-existing Debian system using sid, stretch or jessie-backport, plugging a USB
+existing Debian system using sid, stretch or jessie-backports, plugging a USB
 stick and choosing if one wants to update the USB stick or to install Tails
 using a previously downloaded ISO image.

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