Hi, patches attached. cheers, Holger
From 1a149dad1d4e92d654e596b8737e2d813c740d19 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org> Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 14:57:21 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] explain abbreviation when using it for the first time --- content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md | 9 +++++---- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md index 631afa6..44d4289 100644 --- a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md +++ b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md @@ -5,10 +5,11 @@ Author: u Tags: tails, privacy, anonymity, announce Status: draft -[Tails][tails-link] is a live OS based on Debian GNU/Linux which aims at -preserving the user's privacy and anonymity by using the Internet anonymously -and circumventing censorship. Installed on a USB device, it is configured to -leave no trace on the computer you are using unless asked explicitly. +"The Amnesic Incognito Live System" ([Tails][tails-link]) is a live OS based +on Debian GNU/Linux which aims at preserving the user's privacy and anonymity +by using the Internet anonymously and circumventing censorship. Installed on +a USB device, it is configured to leave no trace on the computer you are using +unless asked explicitly. [![Tails Logo](|filename|/images/tails-logo-flat.png)][tails-link] -- 1.9.1
From ed05be10329823bf50c85bfb88e3697cba954ab5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org> Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 15:00:09 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] =?UTF-8?q?installing=20and=20running=E2=80=A6?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md index 44d4289..da9caa8 100644 --- a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md +++ b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md @@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ problematic for less tech-savvy users. It required starting Tails three times, and copying the full ISO image onto a USB stick twice before having a fully functional Tails USB stick with persistence enabled. -This can now be done simply by installing Tails Installer in your existing -Debian or Ubuntu system, plugging a USB stick and choosing if one wants to -update the USB stick or to install Tails using a previously downloaded ISO -image. +This can now be done simply by installing and running Tails Installer in your +existing Debian or Ubuntu system, plugging a USB stick and choosing if one +wants to update the USB stick or to install Tails using a previously downloaded +ISO image. Tails installer also helps Tails users to create an encrypted persistent storage for personal files and settings in the rest of the available space. -- 1.9.1
From b6d66556091e081c8d7ddd8d09c73641228d9449 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org> Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 15:00:59 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] mention sid, stretch and jessie-backports instead of ubuntu --- content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md index da9caa8..681a9cd 100644 --- a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md +++ b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md @@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ times, and copying the full ISO image onto a USB stick twice before having a fully functional Tails USB stick with persistence enabled. This can now be done simply by installing and running Tails Installer in your -existing Debian or Ubuntu system, plugging a USB stick and choosing if one -wants to update the USB stick or to install Tails using a previously downloaded -ISO image. +existing Debian system using sid, stretch or jessie-backport, plugging a USB +stick and choosing if one wants to update the USB stick or to install Tails +using a previously downloaded ISO image. Tails installer also helps Tails users to create an encrypted persistent storage for personal files and settings in the rest of the available space. -- 1.9.1
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