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Re: Request for review post: Tails installer is now in Debian



Hi,

patches attached.


cheers,
	Holger
From 1a149dad1d4e92d654e596b8737e2d813c740d19 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 14:57:21 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] explain abbreviation when using it for the first time

---
 content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
index 631afa6..44d4289 100644
--- a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
+++ b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
@@ -5,10 +5,11 @@ Author: u
 Tags: tails, privacy, anonymity, announce
 Status: draft
 
-[Tails][tails-link] is a live OS based on Debian GNU/Linux which aims at
-preserving the user's privacy and anonymity by using the Internet anonymously
-and circumventing censorship. Installed on a USB device, it is configured to
-leave no trace on the computer you are using unless asked explicitly.
+"The Amnesic Incognito Live System" ([Tails][tails-link]) is a live OS based
+on Debian GNU/Linux which aims at preserving the user's privacy and anonymity
+by using the Internet anonymously and circumventing censorship. Installed on
+a USB device, it is configured to leave no trace on the computer you are using
+unless asked explicitly.
 
 [![Tails Logo](|filename|/images/tails-logo-flat.png)][tails-link]
 
-- 
1.9.1

From ed05be10329823bf50c85bfb88e3697cba954ab5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 15:00:09 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] =?UTF-8?q?installing=20and=20running=E2=80=A6?=
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

---
 content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
index 44d4289..da9caa8 100644
--- a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
+++ b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ problematic for less tech-savvy users. It  required starting Tails three
 times, and copying the full ISO image onto a USB stick twice before having a
 fully functional Tails USB stick with persistence enabled.
 
-This can now be done simply by installing Tails Installer in your existing
-Debian or Ubuntu system, plugging a USB stick and choosing if one wants to
-update the USB stick or to install Tails using a previously downloaded ISO
-image.
+This can now be done simply by installing and running Tails Installer in your
+existing Debian or Ubuntu system, plugging a USB stick and choosing if one
+wants to update the USB stick or to install Tails using a previously downloaded
+ISO image.
 
 Tails installer also helps Tails users to create an encrypted persistent
 storage for personal files and settings in the rest of the available space.
-- 
1.9.1

From b6d66556091e081c8d7ddd8d09c73641228d9449 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Holger Levsen <holger@layer-acht.org>
Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 15:00:59 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] mention sid, stretch and jessie-backports instead of
 ubuntu

---
 content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
index da9caa8..681a9cd 100644
--- a/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
+++ b/content/2016/tails-installer-in-debian.md
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ times, and copying the full ISO image onto a USB stick twice before having a
 fully functional Tails USB stick with persistence enabled.
 
 This can now be done simply by installing and running Tails Installer in your
-existing Debian or Ubuntu system, plugging a USB stick and choosing if one
-wants to update the USB stick or to install Tails using a previously downloaded
-ISO image.
+existing Debian system using sid, stretch or jessie-backport, plugging a USB
+stick and choosing if one wants to update the USB stick or to install Tails
+using a previously downloaded ISO image.
 
 Tails installer also helps Tails users to create an encrypted persistent
 storage for personal files and settings in the rest of the available space.
-- 
1.9.1

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