Re: [RFR and translations] bytemark donation to debian core infrastructure
On Tue, Apr 02, 2013 at 05:28:43PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Martin Zobel-Helas wrote:
> > http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2013/20130404.wml?view=markup
>
> There's a bit I'm not sure of here. Where it says that the hardware
> "consists of a fully-populated HP Blade System (containing 16 blades
> servers)"...
>
> First, isn't it "HP BladeSystem" (or maybe "HP BladeSystem solution"
> or something)?
Yes, BladeSystem is correct. There's probably a ® needed.
> Second, shouldn't that be "16 server blades" (or given that we've
> already established what sort they are, maybe just "16 servers")?
Yes, "16 servers" is fine.
> I've gone with my first guess in each case, but maybe somebody knows
> better. On the other hand I'm pretty confident that "HP Modular
> Storate Arrays" just need a single-character typofix.
Yes, that could use a s/ate/age/.
Thanks for catching these.
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