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Re: [RFR and translations] bytemark donation to debian core infrastructure

On Tue, Apr 02, 2013 at 05:28:43PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Martin Zobel-Helas wrote:
> > http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2013/20130404.wml?view=markup
> There's a bit I'm not sure of here.  Where it says that the hardware
> "consists of a fully-populated HP Blade System (containing 16 blades
> servers)"...
> First, isn't it "HP BladeSystem" (or maybe "HP BladeSystem solution"
> or something)?

Yes, BladeSystem is correct.  There's probably a ® needed.

> Second, shouldn't that be "16 server blades" (or given that we've
> already established what sort they are, maybe just "16 servers")?

Yes, "16 servers" is fine.

> I've gone with my first guess in each case, but maybe somebody knows
> better.  On the other hand I'm pretty confident that "HP Modular
> Storate Arrays" just need a single-character typofix.

Yes, that could use a s/ate/age/.

Thanks for catching these.

Luca Filipozzi

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