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Re: [RFR and translations] bytemark donation to debian core infrastructure



Martin Zobel-Helas wrote:
> http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2013/20130404.wml?view=markup

There's a bit I'm not sure of here.  Where it says that the hardware
"consists of a fully-populated HP Blade System (containing 16 blades
servers)"...

First, isn't it "HP BladeSystem" (or maybe "HP BladeSystem solution"
or something)?

Second, shouldn't that be "16 server blades" (or given that we've
already established what sort they are, maybe just "16 servers")?

I've gone with my first guess in each case, but maybe somebody knows
better.  On the other hand I'm pretty confident that "HP Modular
Storate Arrays" just need a single-character typofix.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package


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