Welcome daniel, and thank you. Most of your changes were applied (by
Justin B Rye). Your last change was not applied yet, the one
young people's experience of computers has changed over the yearsto
young people's experience of computers have changed over the years
I am not a native speaker of English, but I consider the current text correct. For me, "young people's experience of computers" is singular.
Also, it would be nice to credit you if we could know your full name.
On 2013-02-02 03:58, daniel-s wrote: