On Ma, 07 aug 12, 19:49:17, Francesca Ciceri wrote: > > The draft of this press release is now available: the idea is to send it > out in a couple of days. As usual, we'd be grateful for reviews and > translations. It doesn't seem fantastic to me, so feel free to improve > the wording! > > As usual, you can find the draft here: > http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml?view=markup Hi, See attached a very intrusive patch. Kind regards, Andrei -- Offtopic discussions among Debian users and developers: http://lists.alioth.debian.org/mailman/listinfo/d-community-offtopic
From 3c4caecb9e4610e9dab8e49c0916a89fc71cd729 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andrei Popescu <andreimpopescu@gmail.com> Date: Wed, 8 Aug 2012 09:59:06 +0300 Subject: [PATCH] Rewrite the announcement to mention more changes, but without going into too many details. --- announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml | 15 ++++++++------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml b/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml index bc3b300..8edbc80 100644 --- a/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml +++ b/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ # $Id$ # $Rev$ -<define-tag pagetitle>Debian announces first preview of upcoming Wheezy release</define-tag> +<define-tag pagetitle>Debian announces first beta of the installer for the upcoming Wheezy release</define-tag> ## When is this announcement likely to be send out? Please keep in mind, ## that it should also be reviewed and translated @@ -20,14 +20,15 @@ <p> The Debian Installer team announced the first beta release of the installer for Debian 7.0 <q>Wheezy</q>. -This new release includes various improvements as, for instance, the new -official theme <q>Joy</q> as boot background, the addition of -<q>Wheezy</q> keys to the debian-archive-keyring pacakge as well as an -update for the Linux kernel, providing variuos fixes. -</p> +This new release includes various improvements in different areas, like booting, +Linux kernel, APT, low memory installs, and networking. It also uses +the new official theme <q>Joy</q>. 73 languages are supported for installation +(56 of them complete). <p> -More changes are listed in the Debian Installer team's +The changes are detailed in the Debian Installer team's <a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2012/08/msg00000.html";>announcement</a> to the Debian community. +</p> +<p> There are some <a href="http://www.debian.org/devel/debian-installer/errata";>known issues</a> with the installer that do not need to be reported, but the Debian installer team do need your help to find more -- 1.7.10.4
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