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Re: Request for review: upcoming announcement about new brasilian security mirror


On Tue Mar 01, 2011 at 12:17:35 +0000, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> > here [1] you can find the draft of the upcoming announcement about a new
> > security mirror in South America: as the content is mature, is now time for a
> > spelling/grammar/lessical review :).
> It's tricky, because a lot of it is inside quotation marks.
> For instance, it quotes Martin Zobel-Helas as saying "We are happy
> we soon can cover all continents".  This is slightly awkward
> English, but it also raises a more subtle issue: different cultures
> have different traditional tallies for the number of continents.

Feel free to reword my sentence in a way that meets our needs. 

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