Re: Press Release: Debian turns 17
Query quote word choice and punctuation, fix DFSG expansion.
Justin B Rye <firstname.lastname@example.org> wrote:
> Gabriella Coleman wrote:
> > "FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
> > The Debian Project is pleased mark the 17th anniversary of its start. As
> is pleased to mark
> (or) happy (or) inception
> > the official project history states; "The Debian Project was
> > officially founded by Ian Murdock on August 16th, 1993. At that time,
> > the whole concept of a "distribution" of Linux was new. Ian intended
> > Debian to be a distribution which would be made openly, in the spirit of
> > Linux and GNU".
(Nesting ""s is a bit confusing - switch one set to single ''s?)
> > of software packages, all following Debian's Free Software Guidelines.
> Insert something about "available for a wide range of architectures"?
> Mention that Squeeze, just frozen, is more than just a Linux distro?
the Debian Free Software Guidelines.
Hope that helps,
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