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Re: BSP in Bordeaux (France) during LSM/RMLL, 6-11 July 2010

Xavier Oswald wrote:
> Thanks Stefano. Here is a draft for a news entry. Im not a native english
> speaker so help is very welcome. :)

Some more native-speaker suggestions (incorporating Jeremiah's).

> Debian Project At LSM/RMLL 2010
> ===============================
> 6-11 July 2010
> --------------
> The Debian Project is happy to announce that it will be represented at
> the LSM/RMLL event in Bordeaux, France, this year. At the booth, members of the 
> project will be available for questions and discussions and will give a preview
> of the new version Debian 6.0 "Squeeze", which is expected to be released this
The word "version" doesn't quite fit here; probably you should just
drop it (or trim it right down to "a preview of Debian 6.0
"Squeeze", which...").

> year.
> The Debian project invites users, developers and everyone else interested to
> visit the booth and ask questions, discuss technical issues and meet the Debian
> project and its developers in person.
> As for lot of organized Debian booth, goodies and Tshirts will be selled there.

  As for the organized Debian booth, goodies and T-shirts will be sold there.

> More information at http://debian.org or contact Xavier Oswald
> <xoswald@debian.org>.
> About LSM/RMLL
> --------------
> 2010 Libre Software Meeting is a free (as a beer and as a speech) and non 
                                         as in         as in            non-commercial
> commercial conference with talks, workshops and round tables about Free
> Software and its uses. The LSM goal is to provide a place for exchange between
> Free Software developers, users and stakeholders.
> LSM is organized this year in Bordeaux from 6th to 11th of July, 2010 by a set 
    has been organized?
> of local LUGs and organizations with the help of several public and private
> sponsors.
> More information at http://2010.rmll.info/?lang=en
> Debian related talks:
> ---------------------
> Debian Edu Blend - by Adreas Tille
> DebianEdu/Skolelinux - by Xavier Oswald and Christian Kuelker
> Debian Accessibility Blend  - by Andreas Tille
> The Debian GNU/Linux project  - by Xavier Oswald
> FusionForge, one year and a half later  - by Roland Mas 
> Bug Squashing Party:
> --------------------
> In order to help Debian for the release of Debian Squeeze, there will be a
> Bug-Squashing-Party holding during LSM/RMLL.

Something like:
  In order to help Debian towards the release of Squeeze, a Bug Squashing Party
  will be held during LSM/RMLL.
> Even if you are not a Debian developer, but are interested in helping
                                          as long as you are interested in helping

> Debian to get all the open release critical bugs fixed, you're welcome

> at the BSP. There will be enough developers around to sponsor your NMUs. 
> Some more information about BSPs and RC-Bugsquashing can be found at [1] and
> [2].
> Coordination for the BSP is done on the wiki page[3].
> [1] http://people.debian.org/~vorlon/rc-bugsquashing.html
> [2] http://bugs.debian.org/release-critical/
> [3] http://wiki.debian.org/BSP2010/Bordeaux 

JBR - and today's single word in West Greenlandic is:
     "Silly me, I went and spoke out of turn as usual!"

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