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Re: Please review announcement of upcoming release of Debian 4.0r4 "etch-and-a-half"

dann frazier wrote:
>  Thanks for working on this. Here's some suggested that helped clarify
> the language for me, and includes some stronger wording around the d-i
> network console issue (Frans may have something better though).

I spotted one typo:

> +<p>Existing Debian GNU/Linux 4.0 installation CDs and DVDs can continue to be
> +used to install this update. After installation, upgrading via an up-to-date
> +Debian mirror will cause any out of date packages to be updated. However, users
> +of the network-console installation method are strongly encouraged to update
> +their media, see the "Debian Installer" portion of this announcment for

(And how about a semicolon on the same line before "see"?)
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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