RE: [DRAFT FOR REVIEW] Sanger Institute Debian cluster 320 TB swap 1.5PB storage
Looks good to me, apart from par.
"Each of the 27 new tehcnology robotic computorized..."
Should be:
"Each of the 27 new technology robotic computerized..."
Don
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-----Original Message-----
From: Tony Cox [mailto:avc@sanger.ac.uk]
Sent: 04 March 2008 09:48
To: Phil Butcher
Cc: Andre Felipe Machado; debian-publicity@lists.debian.org;
press.officer@sanger.ac.uk
Subject: Re: [DRAFT FOR REVIEW] Sanger Institute Debian cluster 320 TB
swap 1.5PB storage
I have added more tweaks.
Tony
Phil Butcher wrote:
> I have reviewed the text and made small modifications for it to be
> more accurate.
>
> I hope this is OK.
>
> Regards
>
> Phil Butcher
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Andre Felipe Machado [mailto:andremachado@techforce.com.br]
> Sent: 04 March 2008 02:09
> To: debian-publicity@lists.debian.org
> Cc: press.officer@sanger.ac.uk; avc@sanger.ac.uk; Phil Butcher
> Subject: [DRAFT FOR REVIEW] Sanger Institute Debian cluster 320 TB
> swap 1.5PB storage
>
> Hello,
> Please, review the attached draft looking for errors and improvements.
> The most updated draft version is maintained, and rendered, at [0].
> The target publishing date is March 6th, 2008, 12:00 GMT and
> corrections should be submitted to the debian-publicity list [1] until
> that deadline, please.
> Thanks.
> Andre Felipe Machado
>
>
> [0] http://times.debian.net/1225
> [1] http://lists.debian.org/debian-publicity
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