Hi! * Michael Banck <mbanck@debian.org> [070406 14:40]: > Very nice. Thanks. > "Debian GNU/Linux is a free operating system" > I'd write "Free" here, but dunno. I'm not sure; I'll leave that to a native speakers. > I'd put Iceweasel first in the list of Ice* stuff. Done. > Also, "are automatically handled by the aptitude package management > tool" looks a bit dangerous, maybe qualify that as "mostly automatic" or > "automatically handled for most configurations..." Done. > and mention the release notes a bit earlier, so people don't stop > reading and fire up aptitude dist-upgrade. Uhm... the release notes are mentionen three lines later, I think that's okay. Yours sincerely, Alexander
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