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Re: Second draft (was Re: we need a release announcement -- soon [source material])



On Aug 07, Matthew Vernon wrote:
>  >    developers and end-users; accordingly, we believe Debian 2.2 is an
>  >    extremely well-tested Linux distribution ever.
> 
> This is bad english - either loose the ever, or change to something
> like "the most well-tested Linux distribution ever" , or "one of the ..."

The revision from the first draft didn't catch all of the sentence.
Fixed.

>  >           + GNOME 1.0.56 (You can get GNOME 1.2 packages for Debian 2.2
>  >             from [1]Helix Code) - A free desktop environment.
> 
> I think this should Helix Code[1]

Blame lynx -dump ;-)

>  >           + Emacs 20.7, XEmacs 21.1.8 - The world's largest text editor.
> 
> Couldn't we think of something more complementary to say about emacs?
> "comprehensive" "advanced" "One True" :)

GNU Emacs 20.7, XEmacs 21.1.8 - The world's largest and most
comprehensive text editors.


Chris



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